[platform-coop-dev-kit] Platform Coop Benefits page

Li, Cheryl cheryl.li at ocadu.ca
Mon Apr 15 15:08:27 UTC 2019


Hi Trebor and Michael,

I’m putting some of the copy into the pages for “how platform coops can benefit you”, and I’m noticing that for the category of people, “another curious person”, it doesn’t quite fit with the existing verbiage template on the site. Attached is the page for reference. The places don’t quite fit include:


  *   Up top as a selection in the drop down: “I am a (another curious person).”
  *   First paragraph: “Benefits of platform coops for (another curious person).” (this could work)

Please let me know if there’s copy I can change it to so that flows a bit better.

Thanks,
Cheryl
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