[platform-coop-dev-kit] Platform Coop Benefits page

[Michael McHugh]

Hi Cheryl,

Would simply "I am a (curious person)" work? Or "a person who wants to
learn more"?

I don't think Trebor and I have worked out the longer text tho for this
category. Unless Trebor there is something you drafted?

My best,

M




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On Mon, Apr 15, 2019 at 11:09 AM Li, Cheryl <cheryl.li at ocadu.ca> wrote:

> Hi Trebor and Michael,
>
>
>
> I’m putting some of the copy into the pages for “how platform coops can
> benefit you”, and I’m noticing that for the category of people, “another
> curious person”, it doesn’t quite fit with the existing verbiage template
> on the site. Attached is the page for reference. The places don’t quite fit
> include:
>
>
>
>    - Up top as a selection in the drop down: “I am a (another curious
>    person).”
>    - First paragraph: “Benefits of platform coops for (another curious
>    person).” (this could work)
>
>
>
> Please let me know if there’s copy I can change it to so that flows a bit
> better.
>
>
>
> Thanks,
>
> Cheryl
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